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with plotting comes happyness

  • Nov. 25th, 2008 at 7:46 PM

well i have managed to fill in a humonas gap and have put reasoning behind a certian thing though i won't be able to put the event when i origanly wanted to :( but it will be in here ohh i have thought of some diolge

What is this ?

um.. well... drawings

Their nice, really

yea it's more then that i just don't feel like typing it all

more plotting to come i love to plot :)

he's a snek peak of the event that i havce justr plotted

Light is pluscing out the earth that surrounds me, like a human that has just been shott in the jugular attery, barley cligging to life. I have seen this before, yes i have. Criptic messges, criptic until they are right before the eyes. a frightenting chill runs down my spine, light still dimining, and i hear is ragged voice in my head.
Kill
But it's not alone, a faint whisper is reverbiratting right beofore all the light flikers out completly. Still able to see i despretly search around for the reason for the light qabruptly dissipaering, but my vision soon blacks out. though soon i'm surrounded by differned surroundings, a visison.
Kill

Comments

[info]brokencrystal7 wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2008 02:38 am (UTC)
interesting plotting you have been doing. i havent been doing much about my story except for rapidly adding music in my playlist. jeez i found this song that is SO i mean EXACTLY what the next chapter is pretty much about. i mean i was even shocked at how the lyrics are so close to how Tyler is feeling in this chapter.
anyways i have to get back to writing which i have been neglecting for a while so i will go back and write right now. ^-^
[info]writter1211 wrote:
Nov. 26th, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)
yes and now everythign make sence in the fututre b/c idk how i was goign to do what i was goign to do without this new thing :)

ha music just comes to me i have only lie.... two songs but it's getting their

yay writting

have u gotten to my chapters yet ?
[info]bellamcullen wrote:
Nov. 28th, 2008 01:20 am (UTC)
ur writing is so subtle. im not smart enough. LOL. can someone decipher this for me? this is what i think ur saying like down to my level of smartness. ...Someone's dying? and someone is like next to him or her. hmm....i dont know :(

i rlly like it. i just need to get smarter at analyzing things. keep up the good work.
[info]writter1211 wrote:
Nov. 28th, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)
yay bella is back :)) i been wondering where u been

and no one is dying
it's just Jamie beingher nomral ole self i'm gald you're back
hwo was twilight movie ??
[info]bellamcullen wrote:
Nov. 29th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
lol SEE i dont understand!! i need to like bring up my IQ level. haha thanks for the welcoming message.

twilight movie-....hmm.....its...okay. it was kinda cheap but i liked it. The effects were a little off. I mean, they slo-motioned too many things and every scene was like a super close up. I really didnt like Taylor Lautner as Jacob and i hope hes not in New Moon. He's cute, but i dont think he can play a werewolf. He just...uggh...iono. I like some parts, like, they're cute. Whatever! lol. im just babbling now. i just hope that with the new budget, they'll make the effects better. and, i hope that they pick Steven Strait as Jacob. If they dont i will SRSLY! CHOKE! CATHERINE AND MELISSA!(director and the screenplay writer)
[info]writter1211 wrote:
Nov. 29th, 2008 05:40 pm (UTC)
ha no u don't you're smart :)

i know too much slow motion that erked me soo much and the close ups

they NEED a new screen writer that was why i didn't like most of the movie the diolige was meh and they chopped up the movie soo badly , it was horribly editted

yes i was very dissoipted with the sparkles and they killed the medow sence

taylor was okay his voice needs to change! like NOWW it's sooo agrvatting i think it was his hair that bothered me the most it just looked so fake
[info]bellamcullen wrote:
Nov. 29th, 2008 11:52 pm (UTC)
OMG yea!! someone who understands!

I hate...I HATE! the screenwriter. Like, with a passion. I wished she'd go jump off a freakin cliff!!!!
The meadow and the sparkle scene wass soooo not right. And the meadow was like right by the school? like wtf!? that's so not romantic.
yes! i think that's what bothers me too. I mean hes attractive but MY GOD! his voice is.. not at all manly. Well, i guess for now its ok cause hes "happy-go-lucky" and he can be a little cute innocent boy. But not in New Moon. And his wig was soo fake! there was like a straight line somewhere.haha. like his hair was too fixed and perfect. like he spent hours doing it.
[info]writter1211 wrote:
Nov. 30th, 2008 11:08 pm (UTC)
me too haha like bella ?
i know it was like wt is this ? this isn't the medow sence is it and this i was like oh great it IS the medow sence

the wig needs to go, nedds to go now ! how old of Taylor shouldn't hic voice chnaged already i know mine has wts takign him so long! haha j/j taylor maybe he can just dik they just can't chnage actors like that .... dude they making BD into a movie that will be horirble

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